March 30, 2011 
Written by Efrain Nieves
A year has past,
Mnemonic inception,
Fresh as daisies growing in an open plain.
Encircling, perennial
Lasting throughout the ages.
Love,
The speeding train,
Running through our veins.
Every heartbeat calls your name.
Every moment away is a lifetime.
A year has past,
No unsettling distortions,
Fresh as daisies growing in an open plain.
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It is great! You should link it to http://onestoppoetry.com/2011/03/one-shot-poetry-wednesday-week-39.html
Thank you Deborah. After submitting my poem on Wednesday and browsing the site I think I am fan. Thanks for the link.
nice. it really hits its stride at love, the speeding train…and i love daisies as well…
Thank you Brian, glad you enjoyed it.
Love its imagery Efrain!
Thanks mike.
love the use of the speeding train and the daisies here – makes a nice contrast between speed and rest
Thank you for the comment Claudia.
this was very well written…some grest word choices…nice flow..cheers pete
Thank you for the comment Pete.